Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Francisco's First Blog

Blog
english scores
T.o. Notes
The writing process
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RJ 3.2
T.o.  p. 100-118


Happy birthday, Honey!
Zeyna just finished reading the blog from yesterday and now we are taking notes on chapter 6. Dally doesn't want Johnny to turn himself in because he doesn't want him to turn tough and mean like him. Then there is a plot twist when they come back from Dairy Queen the church is on fire. We are now reading some of The Outsiders. We are reading the part where Ponyboy and Johnny save the kids from the burning church. Then Pony comes to and Jerry is staring at him in an ambulance. Jerry thinks Pony and Johnny and Dally are heros. Oh man. Now I'm going to have to copy all this tomorrow from someone. Multitasking isn't the easiest thing to do. Now back to The Outsiders. Pony turns out okay but Dally had a pretty bad burn on his arm. Johnny is hurt real badly. Hee broke his back and has lots of burns. Doing this blog thing is hard. Thanks Zayna !!!!!!! We just finished reading and the chapter ends with Darry and Pony reuniting and everything is okay. We are now figuring out our English scores. Yeah, I got an A. I hope everyone else got an A or B. The writing process: Prewriting is when you are thinking about what you are going to write. Some people brainstorm, sketch, outline, draft, and dream. Drafting writing your  ideas down. Try to use complete sentences make paragraphs and correct convenions. Revising rading your draft and try to make it better like organizaton. Ahh the bell rang bye now.

2 comments:

  1. I got a low A. Eh, whatever... Oh yeah, *cough cough* I will get comment of the week.

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  2. *Clap clap* Good job Francisco. You made me proud c:

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